Alcatraz Island Prison...
Stays with our Mark Twain Theme and is based on real situation and time period.
Just a note of how much this author makes the character really seems to be talking to the reader. It really struck me.
On Gennifer's site she talks about writing what you want to know and understand as well as what you know...I liked it. She also has a page http://www.alcaponedoesmyshirts.com/interviews/ (VERY, VERY, VERY INTERESTING!) where she researched by interviewing actual Alcatraz residents and workers. So she learned it to write about what she knows...
Great story. A very enjoyable read!!
Lead---"Today is my dad's first official day as an associate warden on Alcatraz Island, home to anyone who is anyone in the criminal world."
Conclusion---"This is why he is the warden, and Trixle is not."
SIMILE:
“My head begins to throw like someone is digging my brain out with a trowel.”
“…berfore it crumbles, like the house made of sticks in the story the Three Little Pigs.”
ONOMATOPOEIA:
“The swing continued to make a vreek-vrok-vreek-vrok sound.”